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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-28 11:43 AM

The Blues, They Are

The blues, they are a part of me
encompassing my many shades
the palest of the morning skies
to indigo as daytime fades.

Sing out they do, in words of time
from yesterdays, tomorrows wants
And fill my mind with promises
behind the shadows, held in haunt.

They tune me in and turn me round
and dance me in their verses sad.
Within their hold a tear will flow
down softened cheek, 'til moisture clad.

In daytime blues, my passions rise,
as words are sung, in lilt of birds.
I float the clouds, the sun beams guide
a poet's rush is felt and heard.

As twilight enters, siren song,
enticed am I, enduced, ensnared.
Temptation beats its rhythm lure
as midnight blues cry feelings shared.

Enter blue-black moonlit skies
once again I'm shadowed deep,
to dance the music of my dreams
and sway with them in arms of sleep.

I'm shaded blue, from morn 'til night
melodic lines, and in between
embracing me in many strains
of Once Upon..a Blue Moon, scene.

~Wynter/Once in a...Blue Moon

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-28-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-28 11:45 AM

Once in a blue moon does poetry like this come around.....I love the blues and I enjoyed this very much.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-04-28 11:54 AM

how I wish the siren's would call. For your poem sings beautifully.
LP

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-04-28 01:15 PM

Oh,WynterGirl~
This one is just LOVELY !
That little blue muse looks good on you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-04-28 01:41 PM

a man would be crazy not to want to be your Little Boy Blue, Wynter

a fantastic piece of writing here

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-04-28 01:44 PM

Truly a memorable poem. Joyce

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-04-28 10:42 PM

Wynter - remarkable words you write of my passion, the blues. This is most enticing and romantic.

'As twilight enters, siren song,
enticed am I, enduced, ensnared.
Temptation beats its rhythm lure
as midnight blues cry feelings shared.'

I sing blues from a warm heart, happy, sad, it doesn't matter, for the rhythm owns my being.

BC

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