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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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 for all that I have left unsaid for my fearful quivering yet every word I wrote, I bled. Each salted tear that rode my cheek Was but for you, my soul in seek. I have the urge to yet confess Tainted smile in shades of blue— Colors of the void of you. Heartbeat-echoes Tolling truth All the pain, I wish unlearned-- Repulsed but drawn to what I yearn-- cannot forget that fire burns.. Enticement of the flames of blue.. I cannot relent, undo.. I lick my lips and dream of kiss. Serenity would rather-- you. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
quote: excellent! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks, dear lady---but am laughing at ME--was so proud---this time I thought I finally had the graphic---BUT NO!!!! LOL---back to the drawing board! But thanks for reading! Forgot to add---if anybody's interested the graphic is on my homepage....sigh, sigh, sigh, methinks it's time for a brewski...sigh. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-27-2001).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Graphics or not a wonderful write, he says picking up his dobro and reaching for his slide bar, you sing and I'll play thoughs blues away. Greatly enjoyed thank you. Regards Olias. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take me now, then, to task for all that I have left unsaid for my fearful quivering yet every word I wrote, I bled. Each salted tear that rode my cheek Was but for you, my soul in seek. Even in my hopelessness I have the urge to yet confess Tainted smile in shades of blue— Colors of the void of you. All the pain, I wish unlearned-- Repulsed but drawn to what I yearn-- cannot forget that fire burns.. Enticement of the flames of blue.. ================================= yearn...burn...learn... *sigh* ... you knew me mothy heart would come flying round this one  pic or not...yer a beauty in rhymes of blue.  meThough my soul may sit in darkness, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Each salted tear that rode my cheek Was but for you, my soul in seek." I loved this poem....these lines just stood out for me.....  SEA |
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PortuguesePoet Junior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 34 |
Tolling truth All the pain, I wish unlearned-- Repulsed but drawn to what I yearn-- Lovely poem. Strong Emotions, Raw and so much Longing. Loved this poem. Bravo!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ You go, gal ! I could see the picture earlier ... but gosh-darn that GeoCities anyway ! They've blocked linking to their site - even if it's YOUR index site !  But ... I fooled 'em ... I just went to your homepage and got to see it again ! LOL ! Advice ... send picture to Nan ... she will upload it to the PiPTalk server and POOF ! There you are !  Nice write - pic or not ! Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
You have such a uniqueness to your writing. I loved this. "I feel so silly writing this I lick my lips, and dream of kiss" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, especially the lovely Marge for the info...thought I was losing my mind!!! Oh...heheh...  nevermind! But was beginning to think HTML stood for Having Total Migraine Linger...  Thanks again, to all, and I'm working on it, I WANNA DO THE PRETTY STUFF TOO! (serenity stomps her blue feet as she exits, pouting) |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Serenity, I got the pic to work for me in your poem it's stunning sweetie... And like you once said to me before it's your words that sweep me off the floor and even bring me to tears but then again you always seem to touch my heart as you have a gift of expression that I truly admire... I'm still giggling at your HTML explanation... But for the record what I did was I clicked on the pic "x" box to see the properties and then copied the properties in2 my browser and poof I saw your pic on screen then came instantly back 2 this page and poof your pic was on the same page as your poem Hmmm... I dunno if I make sense here but whatever I did it worked rite soooooo I'm heading to the fridge for a brewski rite now cus that explanation got me thirsty CyaLaterPoetFriend |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you flow, girl.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Golly Gosh.... Familiarity—but, NEW Heartbeat-echoes Tolling truth All the pain, I wish unlearned-- Repulsed but drawn to what I yearn-- cannot forget that fire burns.. Enticement of the flames of blue.. Yet every other thought is YOU— I cannot relent, undo.. Sighhhhh Loved this me Sista. Love that Serenity Blue Pic btw and the one above Maree |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
HYou have a unique way with words. Joyce |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say that the blues are you. . . and that you are the blues. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Coco, deer, my sista Maree, Sven and my new friend Joyce...thanks to you all...and a special to my muse! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yet every other thought is YOU— I cannot relent, undo.. I feel so silly writing this-- I lick my lips and dream of kiss. Serenity has got the blues... Serenity would rather-- you. loved it..you can't take any graphics from geocities they blocked them from being used elsewhere....you may have to open a new website just for graphics in another url..I am thinking of doing that..all my past jpgs on here are now only squares of x...hmmmmmmmm Squares Of X..a good title Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - no need to have the blues, not when you write like this. It's very touching and very telling. I liked it much. BC |
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