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my only one |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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in my life (and yes, it is this one I live) I stand truly thrust of might to stand and not one damned inch give. Meet my eyes. Judge for yourself how far I budge... Want a treasure? Meet my eyes... Indulge yourself, my only one. already different in your eyes I want to celebrate surprise - no longer being lonely one. and argue when I think I ought... I want to feed you soup by spoon, the spices of the Goddess moon. That is true. My ears, they beg for word from you. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey this is another great write from those angles only you can come up with. I really love this verse "Want to measure? Meet my eyes. Judge for yourself how far I budge... Want a treasure? Meet my eyes... Indulge yourself, my only one. " That's quite the up front appeal. I's so full of direct desire and honesty. You're good Celeste! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoyed the touch of this, Serenity! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and you deserve to be loved!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we love you serenity. . .  excellent words my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
There is a sadness here that I can't seem to put my finger on. Well written. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
It'll all work out. Faith! Nice write. Bernine A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I loved this. I too a bulge here, a bulge there - am reaching out. LP |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I stand truly thrust of might to stand and not one damned inch give. Want to measure? Meet my eyes. Judge for yourself how far I budge... Want a treasure? Meet my eyes... Indulge yourself, my only one. I wouldn't even have to try already different in your eyes I want to celebrate surprise - no longer being lonely one. I want to hear your every thought and argue when I think I ought... I want to feed you soup by spoon, the spices of the Goddess moon. (how cool is that line...WAY COOL baby)  =================================== I love the emotional imagery and intend in this... a bittersweet declaration me twin... why do we only ...(aaack...nevermind) why ask why..right? ... love this one me girlie :heart me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ethome---you are the sweetest man! You always make me smile! I thank you for that. Kari...thank you as well for continued kindness. It's a joy to know you as well! Kathleen--as do you...Hugs, dear lady. Sven? "we love you serenity..." Oh...what a hug that was...might as well have been written in the sky just for ME! Thank you! PV--There is sadness there...but I think just for today I will count the people who love me instead of worrying about who doesn't! No sadness today! I rebuke it!Bernie...I know it will work out for ME...and sometimes our prayers are answered with a very wise "NO" Thanks.lp? All we can do is try. Thank you. Jan...why ask why, indeed? Yanno what? TO HELL WITH IT!!! ROFL...love ya much, lady! Thanks to all...I think I'm gonna go play now! |
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