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On Rainy Days
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On Rainy Days |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
On Rainy Days It’s always gonna rain some days when did the part of me change that expected sun every day I am grateful that it did there’s alot to be said for rainy days the light’s not so early in my window the heat’s not so consuming of my skin the realization doesn’t so quickly settle on you on rainy days I find I can sleep again |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...to be awakened by the tears of God, that through His sorrow, reawakens earth.... a lovely read.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as long as we have sleep. . . we will have dreams. . . wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simply beautiful...I can say more as you have left me speechless with this. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Those last 5 lines are the best, I think they could even stand alone...of course then you wouldn't have the witnessing of the change in you and your outlook. But I just had to say how much I enjoyed those lines, especially! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So much wisdon here JLR, I congratulate you my friend. The cycle of rain- the cycle of life. Both have their ups and downs. Good Job! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Rainy days make either great hibernation moments~ OR Puddle-jumping joy ! I've taken the time to enjoy both !  Nicely written thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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