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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Midnight Sky ~*Marge Tindal*~  I have felt the warm wind blow across a midnight sky Moon in hidden stage of phase upon her light I cannot rely Indigo mood of deep, deep blue separates me now from you Lyrid Meteor's do fly across a midnight April sky Watching as their sparkles are spent stars begin a rapid descent Finding me in retrograde of all the starlight we have made Lighting up a midnight sky leaving a trail as they pass by Hoping that they glow anew caught up in a star so true *I just had to work the wonders of the Lyrid Meteor Shower into one.* ~Gorgeous painting by Duane Hilton~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And a good job of it you did. Joyce |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Marge this is beautiful, are you sure it isn't a UFO. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Thank you so much ! The meteor shower last evening (2-3a.m.) was exquisite. Hope you get to catch a bit of it. INot2B~ LOL ! Could be ... but I'm fairly certain it's the Lyrid.  This is the annual meteor shower time for such an awesome display. Catch one ! It's lovely to watch. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...you seem to always notice the wonders, and capture them in a way that allows us to notice too, (when you write of them like you do). Thank you much for that. *Peace you. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I am never disappointed on opening one of our veteran poet's posts. I am so pleased to be able to return and share these experiences with all of you. Marge, you feel like an old friend and it is like coming home. This is a beautiful expression. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ I just LOVE sharing. So much wonder in our lives to notice and share. Thank you for the nice reply. RSEvans~ I AM an old friend. Welcome home and thank you for enjoying what I pen. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
OH DEAR MAIDEN YOU ALSO LIKE THE LYRID SHOWER LEAVE A BRIGHT TRAIL AS YOU PASS QUITE A DESCRIPTION OF MOTHER NATURE AT WORK BLESS FOR SHARING WARRIOR |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweet, Sweet Warrior~ My heart soars just knowing we watch the same wonders of the sky. You are the bestest ! !  Love you dearly~ ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I've never seen a meteor shower...had no idea what I was missing. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Set your clock to be on the lawn between the hours of 2-dawn ... You will see a beaut of a show. I will smile, waiting to hear your reaction. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Opps almost missed this today...wow I never saw this type of event before, lucky you! This was a wonderful description so I feel I actually did see it, but then, you always "shed some light on things"! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And work the wonders of it into a beautiful poem you did for sure. Beautiful images Marge....crisp and clear, virtual delight! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
An Excellent way to present it....very nice I love to nice poetry. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hi Marge, I so look forward to times I can come to this place. I know I will always find the most delightful read when I find your poetry. The imagery is beautiful in every way. Deb  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Finding me in retrograde of all the starlight we have made" This is beautiful...I liked these lines best.....very romantic SEA |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, the writing here is lovely... The picture suits the piece very well. The desert at night has always been something I have found to be breathtaking... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Thanks, gal ! It was such a lovely light show ! ETHome~ Appreciate you, my friend. Waseem~ Thank you ever so much for enjoying it. BloomingRose~ Thank you, sweet lady. I dip into Spiritual to find you when I get a chance. SEA~ LOL ! Ahhhhh ... *smiling here* My favorite too - go figure !  AWhispersCaress~ Thank you. The artist works for NASA. His story is quite remarkable - as is his painting. Thanks everyone ! You all make writing and sharing so much fun ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very nice rhyme cadence, a beautiful poem, a brilliant write! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I just learned something from this beautiful piece....thank you for sharing this Marge... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
MargeSweetie, this is fantastic though ya know I didn't catch a glimpse of it you have now given me the sense of what it would be like if I did and I thank you... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Well, I thank you for letting me know. I just love the thought of teaching through poetry ... I know that I have also learned so much from others ... glad to share. VanDana~ Thanks, hon. CoCoBaci~ It is a spectacular annual event - so I hope you can catch it next spring. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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