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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-04-27 10:14 PM

           “WORDS ABOUT YOU”
                     by
                 Bill Charles
                    ~~~~
I know that I write, many poems about you,
    but if you think about it,
        what more can I do…
You’re always in my thoughts, capturing my mind,
    it’s a wonder I haven’t penned more,
        for you’re one of a kind…

So you see, you’re a beautiful woman, most gracious and caring,
    having me feel,
        as if I’m worthy of living…
I take your hand in mine, not wanting to let go,
    for it’s you from now on,
       and these seeds that we sow…
                ~~~~

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 04-27-2001).]

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-04-27 10:23 PM

I agree Bill, what more can you do besides write poems about that person? Loved this, and she must have too!

Coco
Junior Member

since 2001-01-28

Posts 48

2 posted 2001-04-27 10:24 PM

Bill, so nice to see ya and as for your poem well there is one thing more you can do (okay I'm being a wee bit selfish here but I've always stated my mind so here goes...) WRITE MORE because there are readers here like me I'm sure who so much enjoy reading poetry expressing love for that special one in our life that we embrace from the depths of our hearts...

Hugs2uSweetie

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-04-27 10:29 PM

Elizabeth - don't know what the answer is, except to write more about that special someone. Thanks Elizabeth, I appreciate you coming over to my place for a read.

Coco - a'hhhhh, what pleasent words you write about my poems. I deeply appreciate it.
And just for you, tomorrow morning I will post another. It feels so very good that you and others appreciate the poems that I write about a loved one. Thank you.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-04-28 12:40 PM

I love the fact that you do write poems about your special someone. Seems your
poems have become lighter and happier since she's in your life. Keep up the good work.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-04-28 08:09 AM

inot2B - morning to you. Nice to see you, and it is a very beautiful morning here in Alabama. Yes, they have become lighter, but I do have a few sad ones yet to post that I have written. But after those are gone, I'm swearing off sad ones, for now anyway.

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