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Please just pass me by
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Please just pass me by |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
No, you know nothing Of whom I write or of what Yet you slander me You know not the love Of which I speak so often You cannot know me Unjustly accused I stand by my written words Drawn from my own heart I write not for you I write for my own relief From my own belief You don’t like my words You complain and whisper slams Simply don’t read me. That is my answer When you see my name don’t read Please just pass me by. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yikes....I know this wasn't meant for my eyes.....  I enjoy every poem you write and your responses are always wonderful! I hope who ever this is intended for, gets the message |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Never for you ... NEVER Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...whew.... ( thanks for that) You rock |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
My dear, your gentle words I would never pass by. I know not of that which you speak; however, you wrote the words poetically and pleasing. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Interloper, ya know what me thinks ya need a "baciNaSmileNaHug" today and by the way a powerful write PoetFriend as I couldn't have said it any better than what I have quoted from your poem... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Julian ~ I always welcome you and your comments. Thank you for stopping by coco ~ Thanks for the support. I knew a CocoBaci once ... any kin? And lotsa thanx for the smile and hug Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't this the truth... oh to be a dead poet....so that people would just read.... and enjoy! Well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ You just gave me an original idea ... let's form a "Dead Poets' Society!" Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We can add graphics to our poems (or SOME can! LOL) and post in pretty colors and choose our fonts... now if only there was a filter for pre-conceived notions. *S* Well stated! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
suthern ~ Yeah. You got the idea! Hmmmm, how to get those gr8 graphics ... How to perform remote frontal lobotomies ... Hmmmm. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Interloper, you got that rite cus it's the same ole same ole the one and only the smiling PoetFriend you and others here have come to know... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
coco ~ Howdy, ma'am. It is so good to "see" you! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words are always a treasure to read. Hugs sweet one. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Gentle Spirit ~ Thank you for those kind words. I am glad you enjoy.. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Some children like to pull the wings off butterflies just to destroy the beauty, then they grow up unfortunatly there are still jealous people about who must deface beauty wherever they find it. Please continue to write beauty and ignore the jealousy. Well written I enjoyed. Regards, Olias. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
DPS...I think I already belong there... Excellent read! |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwwww Interloper..would you believe ..I go to you first ? i probably always would ahhhhhh |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
No problem with your writing. Heck us Texans stick together around these parts. |
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