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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-27 02:09 PM


surrounded by lies
surrounded by hate
surrounded by ignorance
surrounded by you

you speak nothing but lies
you feel nothing but hate
you think nothing but ignorance
you are nothing but you

you have fooled people with your lies
you have fooled people with your hate
you have fooled people with your ignorance
you have fooled people with you

NO More of your lies
NO More of your hate
NO More of your ignorance
NO MORE OF YOU

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-27 02:24 PM


Oh, you mean intolerance ...  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2001-04-27 02:52 PM


I like how this is open to so much interpretation--and I also like the strength in the drawing that final line. Well done, m'friend!
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