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Complement of Crimson
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Complement of Crimson |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 with the ability to captivate any butterfly’s heart, the inferno of red made its way across my view... swept my heart away...blasted the melody of a thousand hues, giving my world a million more reasons to keep spinning... blazing its path straight through my eyes to my soul, it found you, lying within the marigold glimpses... preparing to make its esteemed appearance, just minutes away, the makings of a fiery masterpiece lay within my reach... waiting patiently for its chance to be revealed, the endurance of inspiration put my anxious tongue to shame... between the clouds of ardor you remain in wait, sharing with me the revelation of a hundred lifetimes... as the haze further proclaims the sunset; like a rainbow across the listlessness of my wits... with the fury of a summer storm...your touch finishes what was started with your first look into my eyes... -kh 04/25/01 to be with you... |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Unbelievable imagery! This piece is truly masterful! I loved it. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Your touch finished what was started with your first look into my eyes". I enjoy your words immensely...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Such a lovely, lovely piece here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
blazing its path straight through my eyes to my soul, it found you, lying within the marigold glimpses... preparing to make its esteemed appearance, just minutes away, the makings of a fiery masterpiece lay within my reach... ========================= as the haze further proclaims the sunset; like a rainbow across the listlessness of my wits... with the fury of a summer storm...your touch finishes what was started with your first look into my eyes... ===================== my goodness..those must be some eyes!!  AWESOME imagery here K, very well expressed and defined for the reader.... excellent blend of imagery and emotion... very cool mix of nature and devotion well done groovy girl  Im thinkin the teach is gonna say "yeppers"  Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your touch finishes what was started with your first look into my eyes... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A superb finish. Well done! Write on! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Secret Whisper: wow...thank you so much for that wonderful reply! that means a lot to me! I am glad you liked this!  JamesMichael: why thank you, too! it's great to know you enjoy my writing!  Marge: thanks! I am glad you enjoyed! JM: well, thank you, m'friend...I hope this is good because it has to take the place of an actual picture...there was a fantastic sunset the other day, and, well, I missed it cuz I ran out of film...  ...so, I decided that the only way to capture it now would be to write about it...so, hopefully the Teach gives me the 'yeppers,' love that extra credit, ya know?? Interloper: thank you! I am happy you liked this! sp to be with you... |
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