Open Poetry #13 |
Paths You Take (BEWARE) |
Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Paths The paths you take The lives you make They’re all to be remembered In search for struggle The desire for obstacles To overcome the overwhelming To stride in pride Not cower and hide To rise to the occasion To look back and say That back in the day You fought through think and thin Though some contenders You’ll face in life You’ll find you cannot win.... With a charming grin and friendly laugh Or a sinister smile and sunken eyes Contenders come in any form and any size They’ll beat you down They’ll take your crown They’ll break your mold and throw away the cast With intent to seduce With intent to destroy To the world your life is a mere toy So I say to you To ones who venture In search to overcome the obstacles of life Do not search! Do not seek! For sorrow and struggle will come to you! The paths you take The lives you make They’re all to be remembered.... By: Joe Houck |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Do not seek! For sorrow and struggle will come to you!" Joe, I agree and feel you must have seen your share of sorrow and struggle. The lives you make They’re all to be remembered...." Yes right or wrong you will remember. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Joe this is so true. How dare another ruin a persons life, but they do. But I am ever the optimist and I know there are a lot more helpers than hinderers. Love, Joyce |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We all choose the path we walk on...how we walk it...how we choose to be remembered...thats what makes each person individually their own...great write |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"Do not search! Do not seek! For sorrow and struggle will come to you!" I agree that we all face no-win situations and that no life is free of sorrow and struggle no matter what path we choose... but I guess I'd rather my inevitable remembrances include "I tried and gave it my all." *S* Welcome to Passions! |
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