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| Open Poetry #13 |
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She Is The Air |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
She is the air that I see She is the air that surrounds me One of the things I cannot decide Is where beneath Heaven Begins the all encompassing sky Where she resides The lack of oxygen sometimes kills Down here below Heaven Thoughts of her sometimes fills The void that chills She is the air that I need She is the air that I breathe There is nothing I would rather feel Than the cool, calm caress Of a wind that somehow heals This pleasure I steal The desire for this thing is so much The closeness of her breath The way only it can touch It is my only crutch She is the air that tastes so sweetly She is the air so completely |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
The romance you give....brings a girl to her knees.....*swoon*  love this.....your talent is overwhelming |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One of the things I cannot decide Is where beneath Heaven Begins the all encompassing sky Where she resides ==================== There is nothing I would rather feel Than the cool, calm caress Of a wind that somehow heals This pleasure I steal The desire for this thing is so much The closeness of her breath The way only it can touch It is my only crutch She is the air that tastes so sweetly She is the air so completely =============================== rhyme divine and romantic intend defined .. this is simply poetry in motion... and the rhyme scheme is very cool, this is a pleasure when read a loud..as all yours are. and your "she is" series are some of your very best. Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sneaks in and puts in library* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your thoughts...James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very romantic and well done, thanks for sharing! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well, PK, you just keep those hearts beating along with your words...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this piece was so very romantic and I enjoyed reading it......Sue Suetang |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed she is PK. . . and is there any other way??? ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hope she appreciates this lovely poem!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PK, thank you for sharing your thoughts and senses with us all... it is wonderful how you write for everyone.... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you all, I bow low before you. How can I say thank you enough? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Simply breath taking... *smiles* -Tier |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is a wonderful feeling when someone means this much to us. Beautiful....... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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