Nothing I Say Will Campare To U

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Open Poetry #13

Nothing I Say Will Campare To U

juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-26 03:22 PM

just a my thought of heaven
I think of ur image
the beautiful smile
with a pretty kind and inocent stile
ur dreams reflects in ur hair
kind of soft and a lil complicated in curls
but the beauty of pirls
its so low compared to ur eyes
it might seem as my imagination
this comparations i make
but its my heart
that achive perfect comparison
as for ur beauty has no end
in the earth it might begone
but it will take a long trip through
the universe to find the end of it
as for u in my dreams
will always be a dream come true
that god took off my sleep
to create u
and released u on the streets
what a shame its far from me
yet if u get closer
u'll be the queen in here
and there
from begining to end
for ever
ur kingdom will be my heart
and ur guards will be my body
so ull see in the heavens is ur place
and in the door will be mine
no evil will see or touch u
nothing good is better than this feeling i have
for u ..... cause u are from my dreams
and ur beauty fom the heavens

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO

[This message has been edited by juanrodriguez (edited 04-26-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-26 03:25 PM

Write on. May I ask why you SHOUT your titles?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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