Open Poetry #13 |
Rambling In The Darkness..... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Darkness consumes me draws me in effortlessly too easy too willingly understanding this cool heat of lust powerful........ a want unable to speak of just out of reach yet always so there so near in the darkness everything is clear still~ I can't find my way knowing you are there in the darkness searching just the same......... ~SEA~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
let there be light!!!!!!! sounds like you've described the stumbling through darkness pretty well.... watch out!!!!... you could get bruised if you bump into something too hard to handle.... lol hotstuffyounglady!!! ohmeohmy! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
SEA....The sun is just looking over the ridge here so I will be unable to respond with the warmth this poem deserves. As for the rest of the folks back east, they must all be dead. All teasing aside, I like this. It's very...perceptive, and honest. Bob |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sometimes near, sometimes so far away. You really drove home some good thoughts here SEA. Expressed yourself so very well, I can understand it completely. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Darkness consumes me draws me in effortlessly ....................Excellent |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can't find my way knowing you are there in the darkness searching just the same......... ==================== thats why we moths fly towards the light very well written Sea..youre growing, youre glowing Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lust is a four letter word, SEA. Shame on you! Seriously this is wonderful writing and I greatly enjoyed the fine read. Michael Proust- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Darkness envelops And lust more easily found One needs no searching What you seek is found inside For I am deep within you Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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