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Open Poetry #13

Come, Morn

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-25 11:29 PM

somnolent eyes gaze
easterly, then, through the haze
twink’ling at first light

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-04-26 12:46 PM

Well I like it, even as I sit here about to doze off . . .

Krawdad
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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-04-26 07:48 AM

Karilea~

Peek-a-boo sunshine
Morning born to perfection
Splatters me with light

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-04-26 09:03 AM

(sigh) Our sunshine lights this forum again with her beautiful haikus! (sigh) I love the spring morning so very much, it always brings a cheer to my face. (smiles) Very beautiful visions! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-26 09:25 AM

this is lovely, Sunshine, you made the nouns and verbs work and that is good poetry.

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-26-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-26 10:16 AM

Sleepy eyes open
squinting against rising sun
awakening rays

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2001-04-26 12:03 PM

too cool = wish I could write these -

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