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Come, Morn |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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somnolent eyes gaze easterly, then, through the haze twink’ling at first light |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well I like it, even as I sit here about to doze off . . . Krawdad |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Peek-a-boo sunshine Morning born to perfection Splatters me with light ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Our sunshine lights this forum again with her beautiful haikus! (sigh) I love the spring morning so very much, it always brings a cheer to my face. (smiles) Very beautiful visions! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, Sunshine, you made the nouns and verbs work and that is good poetry. [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sleepy eyes open squinting against rising sun awakening rays Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
too cool = wish I could write these - |
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