Open Poetry #13 |
Turn Around |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Turn Around every contemplation of your mistakes each frame of mind that you’ve slipped into shape take one step back when two forward is good and if it is requested to turn around look back see what you’ve done when you’d rather run turn around open your eyes lift your chin say “not again” then turn around and go forward in calm. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Amazing! This is a path I have been searching tonight...turning around is not so difficult as I thought...going forward, though, still elusive. Thanks for this! |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Ditto. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome piece you have given us! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well said. Esp. the looking back. We MUST learn from the past. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Enjoyed this. *L* |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning Sunshine...you are very wise. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
i agree with Martie ~G~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Turning... and turning... and turning... and getting dizzy... ummm.. that would be dizzier *G* ... and turning... and Sunshine? You know I don't know up from down at best of times and you invite me onto a merrygoround? LOL Seriously... great job... you've written wisely. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
whoa...am dizzy... seriously...I loved this. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Yes.....this is only the way to polish our lives........Thanx for remembring. I love to nice poetry. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine.... you are the best! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"go forward in calm" ...I wish I'd said those words, Karilea. Wonderful, as usual. Michael Proust- |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So much truth here....the past should never be forgotten but used to learn from. No matter what the past was, it brought us to what we are today and that's a positive...excellent thoughts, sunshiny one |
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