Across The Lake - A Response

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Open Poetry #13

Across The Lake - A Response

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-04-25 10:49 PM

“Across the Lake..A Response”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
You entered into my thoughts,
as sunset lay itself bare,
coming closer from the lake,
my softness touched thee,
from gentle lips.......

Into my senses deep, you came,
and I surrounded you, to touch serene,
a tight caress, deepest of kisses warm,
shadows on the ceiling, of loves wants........

Depths perhaps, but dreams not now,
for my lips tasted, every of your wants,
touching gently, deeply with desire, you
slowly to awake, in my dearest embrace.......

Tis you I would be with,
knowing passions never before felt,
the edge of my kiss, like a soft blossom,
flowing towards your heart, with a promise,
to be released into you.........

Touching together, within that craves,
two slowly one, feeling, melting,
sun in the sky, warmth to both,
but tis love, of now that wants,
forever more, tomorrow, and today......
~~~~

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-25 10:50 PM

A beautiful, sentimental poem. Joyce

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-25 11:10 PM

and what a response it is, this is very capitvating, Bill. Someone is a very lucky lady....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-04-26 08:07 PM

Beautiful response**** Seems I've read someone else who knows where this lake is!

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