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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-04-25 10:49 PM


“Across the Lake..A Response”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
You entered into my thoughts,
as sunset lay itself bare,
coming closer from the lake,
my softness touched thee,
from gentle lips.......

Into my senses deep, you came,
and I surrounded you, to touch serene,
a tight caress, deepest of kisses warm,
shadows on the ceiling, of loves wants........

Depths perhaps, but dreams not now,
for my lips tasted, every of your wants,
touching gently, deeply with desire, you
slowly to awake, in my dearest embrace.......

Tis you I would be with,
knowing passions never before felt,
the edge of my kiss, like a soft blossom,
flowing towards your heart, with a promise,
to be released into you.........

Touching together, within that craves,
two slowly one, feeling, melting,
sun in the sky, warmth to both,
but tis love, of now that wants,
forever more, tomorrow, and today......
~~~~



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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-25 10:50 PM


A beautiful, sentimental poem.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-25 11:10 PM


and what a response it is, this is very capitvating, Bill.  Someone is a very lucky lady....

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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3 posted 2001-04-26 08:07 PM


Beautiful response**** Seems I've read someone else who knows where this lake is!
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