Open Poetry #13 |
Passions Gallery: Lady in White (she moves. . . ) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
she moves through the house of love with grace and refinement you can see it as she walks and when she speaks you can see her eyes glisten when she tells of new love and you can see the tears when she tells of love lost and when she writes she tells the stories of a woman who has known love in her life yet, not just this life, but the lives that she has known before lives that have spanned the ages love that has spanned the ages history does not tell her story but poets and minstrels do we know her as she is as she was as she ever will be she is the Lady in White ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - you have some of the most kindest and gentleness words, and they come from only, your most gracious heart. Keep writing Sven, they are most beautiful and caring. BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sven, you capture all with the thinnest thread of ink ever written, and I am sure Lady will see this... and blush! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely tribute to a deserving lady. Joyce |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
A graceful and elegant personification. This is really sweet. A.M. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Lady in White" moves through time because of Poets like you who honor her. Very good poem. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Another beauty, Sven Pen. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
what a beautiful portrayal! Quite lovely! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
BC, thank you my friend. . . it's easy when I have such good friends such as you. . . Sunshine, I hope that she does, and I hope that she likes it. . . Joyce, deserving she is indded. . . thank you. . . AM, thank you!! inot2B, she moves this way on her own, I merely seek to illustrate that movement. . . thank you. . . Temptress, thank you. . . walker, thank you as well my friend. . . Tessa, thank you for reading, glad that you enjoyed. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
through dark and silent, shadowed halls came soft a voice of one who called "Lady, would thou come with me," so I followed his voice through history... Thank you, Sir Knight, for this lovely, lovely write... I am honored. |
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