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Sven
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0 posted 2001-04-25 09:44 PM


she moves
through the house of love
with grace and refinement
you can see it as she walks
and when she speaks
you can see her eyes glisten
when she tells of new love
and you can see the tears
when she tells of love lost
and when she writes
she tells the stories of a woman
who has known love in her life
yet, not just this life,
but the lives that she has known before
lives that have spanned the ages
love that has spanned the ages
history does not tell her story
but poets and minstrels do
we know her as she is
as she was
as she ever will be
she is the
Lady in White

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2001-04-25 09:50 PM


Sven - you have some of the most kindest and gentleness words, and they come from only, your most gracious heart. Keep writing Sven, they are most beautiful and caring.

BC

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2 posted 2001-04-25 10:30 PM


Ah Sven, you capture all with the thinnest thread of ink ever written, and I am sure Lady will see this...

and blush!

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3 posted 2001-04-25 10:38 PM


A lovely tribute to a deserving lady.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-04-25 11:04 PM


A graceful and elegant personification.  This is really sweet.

A.M.

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5 posted 2001-04-26 07:56 PM


"Lady in White" moves through time because of Poets like you who honor her.
Very good poem.

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6 posted 2001-04-26 08:35 PM


Another beauty, Sven Pen.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

walker
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7 posted 2001-04-26 09:19 PM


Lovely!
Tessa
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8 posted 2001-04-26 09:23 PM


what a beautiful portrayal!   Quite lovely!
Sven
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9 posted 2001-04-26 10:06 PM


BC, thank you my friend. . . it's easy when I have such good friends such as you. . .

Sunshine, I hope that she does, and I hope that she likes it. . .  

Joyce, deserving she is indded. . . thank you. . .

AM, thank you!!  

inot2B, she moves this way on her own, I merely seek to illustrate that movement. . . thank you. . .  

Temptress, thank you. . .  

walker, thank you as well my friend. . .

Tessa, thank you for reading, glad that you enjoyed. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady In White
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10 posted 2001-04-27 11:56 PM


through dark and silent, shadowed halls
came soft a voice of one who called
"Lady, would thou come with me,"
so I followed his voice through history...

Thank you, Sir Knight, for this lovely, lovely write...

I am honored.

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