Response to "Rambling in darkness"

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Response to "Rambling in darkness"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-25 06:56 PM

Darkness envelops
And lust more easily found
One needs no searching
What you seek is found inside
For I am deep within you

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-26-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-04-25 07:20 PM

ooohh....succinct and sensual..
nicey and spicy

very cool and perfect poetic reply
well done poet sir

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

2 posted 2001-04-25 07:36 PM

"For I am deep within you".

Lovely... simply lovely.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-04-25 09:57 PM

Interloper....

this is beautiful...

SEA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-25 10:21 PM

Very well crafted...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-26 10:29 AM

Janet Marie ~ I thank you. Indeed I do.

Secret ~ A lovely thought from a lovely lady. Thank you.

SEA ~ A poor response to your 1derful work

Sunshine ~ A high compliment indeed. Thank you for that undeserved recognition.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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