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Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-04-24 01:09 PM

*Gallery Reading Room*

look at her
see that smile?
see those eyes?
see how she floats
across the floor?
she's in love

look at her
hear that sigh?
hear her voice?
hear how the words
just come out?
she's in love

look at her
see that spirit?
hear that laugh?
her days are light
nights are full
she's in love

and this time
she's in love
with me

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-24-2001).]

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-04-24 01:17 PM

Nice pic Sven, but,
"and this time
she's in love
with me"

This time? Interesting . . .curious.

Krawdad
/:-}==
=#===

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-04-24 01:18 PM

Sven.....Nicely expressed....and, congratulations! Bob

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-04-24 01:23 PM

This just dances....

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-24 01:26 PM

well, i'm glad you could tell even though i've made it pretty darned obvious... *sigh*.... but it baffles me how you'd be able to figure it out that it was with you..... *bigsigh*...

hehe *wink*...

shhhhhhhhhh....... awww geez..... an announcement right here in the middle of the internet superhighway???? omg.....

sometimes i write fiction.... sometimes i don't.... how 'bout you? lol

seriously, though, my poet friend.... a lovely write from you .... you are so very observant and phrase things so beautifully

NIAI
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since 2001-03-29

Posts 52

5 posted 2001-04-24 01:32 PM

Love makes us all " shine " Enjoyed the poem and you enjoy the love.

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

6 posted 2001-04-24 01:34 PM

Very, very nice Sven. A proud image portrayed here. Thank you.

Mike

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-04-24 01:34 PM

So very well said. I remember those glowing embers of love and how I floated across any terrain.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2001-04-24 01:47 PM

Beautiful not only in its simplicity, but
in message.

Cor

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-04-24 02:28 PM

Awright! I love it when there's a happy ending

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

10 posted 2001-04-24 02:29 PM

This is quite excellent, sven.

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

11 posted 2001-04-24 02:32 PM

sven, very sweet and uplifting, I enjoyed.

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

12 posted 2001-04-24 03:21 PM

John,

Great poem! I hope it works out for you.

Laura

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

13 posted 2001-04-24 03:45 PM

Oh beautiful!!!!!!! ******Applauds******

I think that must make her very special indeed.

I shall have to scan the room more closely, to catch this!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

14 posted 2001-04-24 05:31 PM

You've done an excellent job on how it does feel for a woman to be in love. This is just how my husband makes me feel.

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

15 posted 2001-04-24 05:37 PM

I am happy for her joy and yours. Joyce

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2001-04-24 05:40 PM

loved it

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

17 posted 2001-04-24 05:47 PM

sven.....and why wouldn't she be?.... helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

18 posted 2001-04-24 06:13 PM

I do believe, sven, that this may be one of my all time favorites from you. I just adore this one!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2001-04-24 06:21 PM

These are the words every man wants to say and write...and how do you feel?...James

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

20 posted 2001-04-24 06:23 PM

*sigh* You've a beautiful heart for writing dontcha think?

Nice image here, Sven Pen.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

21 posted 2001-04-24 09:22 PM

Ah Sven, this is beautiful and would make any woman grateful for someone to write such beautiful words about her........wonderful this magic pen of yours.

Hugs,
D

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

22 posted 2001-04-24 09:46 PM

This poem gets a few sighs and an "awwwwwww!" from me

I love it! Of course, she's in love with you, you're awesome, dont ya know that by now

Take care!
Melissa~

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

23 posted 2001-04-25 12:29 PM

Sure hope it's not fiction...either way it's beautiful in love!

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

24 posted 2001-04-25 12:44 PM

And you've captured it wonderfully, Sven. "and she's in love with me" Excellent.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

25 posted 2001-04-25 04:11 AM

Thanx for sharing this secret. I will see all these things too...lolo

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

26 posted 2001-04-25 04:28 AM

wonderful..i do hope this is autobiographical

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

27 posted 2001-04-25 09:11 AM

and I imagine if we saw your eyes and smile and if we could hear your sighs they would be identical :-)..Very nicely done.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

28 posted 2001-04-25 01:31 PM

Wow. . . I'm amazed. . . thank you all so much. . . I'm glad that you all liked this one. . .

Krawdad, yes, this time. . . so many other times, that special person is in love with someone else. . . thanks. . .

Bob, thank you. . .

Lady in White, care to dance with me??

doreen, how could I not notice?? It was so obvious. . . and I just couldn't keep it inside any longer. . . I had to tell the world. . . and hey, I'm just like you when it comes to writing fiction sometimes, and sometimes not. . .

lol thanks doreen. . .

NIAI, love does indeed make us all shine. . . thank you. . .

Mike, thank you for reading. . .

Julian, I hope that you will get that feeling back soon. . .

Corinne, thank you. . . it's always the simple things isn't it???

Interloper, me too!!

Poetic Knight, thank you my friend. . .

Gemini, glad that you enjoyed. . .

Laura, I wish that for all of us my friend. . .

Just a Woman, I'm sure that it does. . . and while you're scanning the room, don't forget to look in the mirror. . . you never know. . . they might be looking at you. . .

inot2B, this is how it should be for everyone. . . and we should all make each other feel like this. . . thank you my friend. . .

Joyce, thank you. . .

vandana, I knew that you would love this. . .

helen, I have no idea. . .

Tennessee Angel, thank you so much my friend, I'm really glad that you enjoyed this one. . .

James, I feel pretty good today. . . and I know that you'll get your chance to do this very soon my friend. . .

Temptress, I'm not the only one. . .

thank you. . .

GS, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . .

Melissa,

. . . you know, if you keep that up, I'm going to just have to "aawwwwwww" myself. . . thank you. . .

JLR, well, it is. . . but thank you anyway!!

Michael, thank you my friend. . .

Waseem, I know that you will. . .

kaile, as you've seen, it isn't. . . but thank you. . .

kitkat, they probably will be. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

29 posted 2001-04-26 10:29 AM

Sometimes, I'm successful at hiding at least the worst of my misery... but joy is something I just can't keep to myself. *S* I like this very much, Sven... You've captured well the differences being in love and happy makes to the simplest actions. *S*

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