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she's in love |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*Gallery Reading Room* look at her see that smile? see those eyes? see how she floats across the floor? she's in love look at her hear that sigh? hear her voice? hear how the words just come out? she's in love look at her see that spirit? hear that laugh? her days are light nights are full she's in love and this time she's in love with me -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nice pic Sven, but, "and this time she's in love with me" This time? Interesting . . .curious. Krawdad |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven.....Nicely expressed....and, congratulations! Bob |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This just dances.... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, i'm glad you could tell even though i've made it pretty darned obvious... *sigh*.... but it baffles me how you'd be able to figure it out that it was with you..... *bigsigh*... hehe *wink*... shhhhhhhhhh....... awww geez..... an announcement right here in the middle of the internet superhighway???? omg.....  sometimes i write fiction.... sometimes i don't.... how 'bout you? lol  seriously, though, my poet friend.... a lovely write from you .... you are so very observant and phrase things so beautifully  |
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NIAI Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 52 |
Love makes us all " shine " Enjoyed the poem and you enjoy the love. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Very, very nice Sven. A proud image portrayed here. Thank you. Mike |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
So very well said. I remember those glowing embers of love and how I floated across any terrain. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful not only in its simplicity, but in message. Cor |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awright! I love it when there's a happy ending Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This is quite excellent, sven. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
sven, very sweet and uplifting, I enjoyed. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, Great poem! I hope it works out for you.  Laura |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh beautiful!!!!!!! ******Applauds****** I think that must make her very special indeed. I shall have to scan the room more closely, to catch this!
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You've done an excellent job on how it does feel for a woman to be in love. This is just how my husband makes me feel. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I am happy for her joy and yours. Joyce |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sven.....and why wouldn't she be?.... helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I do believe, sven, that this may be one of my all time favorites from you. I just adore this one! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
These are the words every man wants to say and write...and how do you feel?...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* You've a beautiful heart for writing dontcha think?  Nice image here, Sven Pen. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Sven, this is beautiful and would make any woman grateful for someone to write such beautiful words about her........wonderful this magic pen of yours. Hugs, D On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This poem gets a few sighs and an "awwwwwww!" from me I love it! Of course, she's in love with you, you're awesome, dont ya know that by now  Take care! Melissa~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Sure hope it's not fiction...either way it's beautiful in love! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And you've captured it wonderfully, Sven. "and she's in love with me" Excellent. Michael Proust- |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Thanx for sharing this secret. I will see all these things too...lolo |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful..i do hope this is autobiographical |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
and I imagine if we saw your eyes and smile and if we could hear your sighs they would be identical :-)..Very nicely done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow. . . I'm amazed. . . thank you all so much. . . I'm glad that you all liked this one. . . Krawdad, yes, this time. . . so many other times, that special person is in love with someone else. . . thanks. . . Bob, thank you. . . Lady in White, care to dance with me?? doreen, how could I not notice?? It was so obvious. . . and I just couldn't keep it inside any longer. . . I had to tell the world. . . and hey, I'm just like you when it comes to writing fiction sometimes, and sometimes not. . . lol thanks doreen. . . NIAI, love does indeed make us all shine. . . thank you. . . Mike, thank you for reading. . . Julian, I hope that you will get that feeling back soon. . . Corinne, thank you. . . it's always the simple things isn't it??? Interloper, me too!! Poetic Knight, thank you my friend. . . Gemini, glad that you enjoyed. . . Laura, I wish that for all of us my friend. . . Just a Woman, I'm sure that it does. . . and while you're scanning the room, don't forget to look in the mirror. . . you never know. . . they might be looking at you. . . inot2B, this is how it should be for everyone. . . and we should all make each other feel like this. . . thank you my friend. . . Joyce, thank you. . . vandana, I knew that you would love this. . . helen, I have no idea. . . Tennessee Angel, thank you so much my friend, I'm really glad that you enjoyed this one. . . James, I feel pretty good today. . . and I know that you'll get your chance to do this very soon my friend. . . Temptress, I'm not the only one. . . thank you. . . GS, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . . Melissa,  . . . you know, if you keep that up, I'm going to just have to "aawwwwwww" myself. . . thank you. . . JLR, well, it is. . . but thank you anyway!! Michael, thank you my friend. . . Waseem, I know that you will. . . kaile, as you've seen, it isn't. . . but thank you. . . kitkat, they probably will be. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes, I'm successful at hiding at least the worst of my misery... but joy is something I just can't keep to myself. *S* I like this very much, Sven... You've captured well the differences being in love and happy makes to the simplest actions. *S* |
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