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Open Poetry #13

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Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-26 09:27 PM

A very simple verse dedicated to all readers and writers of poetry. Share the moment!

Duet

Music of my heart is born
And words emerge to paper;
As your eyes caress them
I hope they’re met with favor.

For if you feel them giving
A little glow within,
Our hearts just shared a duet
Of feelings, my dear friend.

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2001-03-26 09:32 PM

Simple, direct, a sincere concept. Very nice, thank you.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-03-26 09:32 PM

Thank you so very much!!!!
"Our hearts just shared a duet
Of feelings, my dear friend."

Every minute you are angry, you lose 60 seconds of happiness.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-03-26 09:56 PM

And I Thank You!

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

4 posted 2001-03-26 11:39 PM

Mike, So true, so true and nicely done. Panne

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-03-27 12:33 PM

That is EXACTLY how it feels...perfect Mike

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2001-03-27 02:00 AM

But of course . . . the "other" side of the poem.
(If no one reads it, is it really a poem?)

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-03-27 02:36 AM

That's why we post here isn't it? Very nice. Joyce

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