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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sailing Come bend a comma on the wind, And in the pause Begin again That passage youth once longed to make. Tack! Come about! There are no ruts here on the lake. RMW |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love it, especially the 'comma' superb image! And the 'no ruts' that's great, too! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thank you, Virginia. You are always so considerate. Bob |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Come bend a comma on the wind, And in the pause Begin again Hey RMW, this is great, oh I loved the image in the above lines. Come bend a comma in the wind, oh oh OH love it! Maree  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Avast there matey. Shiver me timbers. The scuttlebut has it that you're a poet. Blow me down if I don't think this is but a cat's paw. Could there be more below decks? I'll clear for action and await your ensign. |
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