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| Open Poetry #13 |
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First Word: Six Syllables, Sounds Like: |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Ouch! buzzing stungmebee Niggling as I mumble free Oozing, popping, moan and hiss Murmur, thudding, croak like this Ah, the rattlesnake did lisp To be sizzled cooked to crisp Oh he shimmied up last week Pow! Made girlfriend screech, go eek. Ow! The squish of pus and goo Every plop and ew P. U. I’m babbling with a great kaboom All is bleak: vroom and zoom! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ This is so far out ... I'd know it was you if I found it anywhere ! Wonderfully well done acrostic ! Amazing you are ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
rofg... and enjoying this thoroughly! *S* |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This is so awesome walt! I love any poem with onomatopoeia in it... LOL This is so cool. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ya'll have made me feel all squishy inside yuh |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
YUK. good acrostic. |
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