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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-25 01:33 PM

Come to me
Take my hand softly
Tenderly
Let my eyes survey
The beauty of you

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-04-25 01:45 PM

Come to me
Take my hand softly
Tenderly
Let my eyes survey
The beauty of you

This is beautiful....well written Interloper. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-04-25 01:50 PM

Somehow this is very similar to the "whistle" line by Bacall...very well done Sir!

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-04-25 02:51 PM

Ah...I love romance...and this is just lovely.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

4 posted 2001-04-25 02:56 PM

wow

[This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 04-25-2001).]

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

5 posted 2001-04-25 03:17 PM

Interloper....Well done....as are the comments. It just does not getting any better than Bogie and Bacall. Bob

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-04-25 03:21 PM

Bob ~ I welcome your visits and comments, as usual. I should do no less for my namesake.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-04-25 05:54 PM

Gentle Spirit ~ Thanks for the kind words and quote.

Lady ~ "just put your lips together and blow" or pucker ...

Auguste ~ Thank you for the read and comment.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-04-25 10:01 PM

Interloper~ should we take that to mean your name is Bob?

this is wonderful and yep, big *sigh*

SEA

Amuse_mi
Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

9 posted 2001-04-25 11:38 PM

That's a heck of a pick-up line!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-04-26 10:24 AM

SEA ~ You can call me anything and I will come arunnin', or swimming, or sailing, or ...

Amuse_mi ~ Hey, why didn't I think of that?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

11 posted 2001-04-27 12:26 PM

Lovely.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2001-04-27 09:26 PM

Come to me
Take my hand softly
Tenderly
Let my eyes survey
The beauty of you

His eyes
they steal her smile
Into the lens he stores
Remembering this pose of now
wants more....

Something I wrote a while ago but fits as a response, "I"
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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