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Open Poetry #13

Acid Burn

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-25 11:04 AM

Acid Burn

it hurts me so to read your rhyme
the acid burns your soul, and mine
your words are cold upon my skin
they burn me, deep within
I have lived every word
even when no one else heard
it is my turn, to hear your voice
can't look away-have no choice
it is not your sins to atone
and in the silence, your never alone
it's ok to look in a strangers face
to melt the horrors, you now erase
so if, you have the need
I know the tears that you now bleed

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2001-04-25 11:12 AM

Thank you i like this

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-25-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-26 09:19 AM

To "feel" another's words is what Passions is all about, whether we're just vening, whining, (heaven forbid) sorrowful or joyful, we all have that acid burn from time to time and thank God we can write about it.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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