Open Poetry #13 |
A Lovers Fingertips |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
A Lover’s Fingertips By: Noah Eaton 4/23/01 A lover’s fingertips softly caress my face Together making the harmonic melody of romance Passion waltzing against the body in every trace The fingers singing in a soft wavy dance Writing lyrics in every gentle stroke Every touch reciting poetry, whispering in my lover’s ears Her body glowing bright against the candlelight, loving her so Her fingers setting fire to my heart, holding her dear She reads all my soft fingers like an open book I can’t read Watching her close her eyes and see her hair flutter Caressing her neck, slowly dragging my fingers up to her cheek Laughing with joy as she bends down to kiss me, deeply in love with her I hold her around her waist, massaging her soft warm backside Feeling her smoothness alone, my mind filled with muses of her sweetness Lips embraced in passion, daydreaming of the heavens and the moon as I softly sigh I see soft fire in her eyes, feeling the warmth of her desires, making love to my princess Touching her long velvet hair, I strum the lyre of passion Conducting the most beautiful music ever heard to me Her soft hand lying on my chest, caressing in pirouette motion Our bodies embraced together, her smile playing glockenspiel and her heart beating in timpani My lover’s fingertips play sweet music to my heart Wishing I could never let her go, listening to our loves symphony Every touch, every slide lighting my eyes, as I look into hers, gazing at the stars With our fingers may we create a serenade of eternal love, for you and me… |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Romantic, sensual and lovely. Well done! |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Although normally I loath love poetry... I found this piece wonderfully written (in consistancy with all your poems.) Excellent piece. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You write a good love poem. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ You can sure write the romance ! Enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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