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I only held you briefly
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I only held you briefly |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Goodbye dream of mine I only held you briefly If ever at all Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But....you had the dream.... This is wonderful! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
There are other dreams and other times. Very nice little poem. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a small piece of your heart, isn't it? It says so much in such a short space. I love this; spoke to me dearly. Kathleen Blake |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I just experienced this...new days...new dreams...nice to have a capacity to desire and dream...James |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Beautiful glimpse of a soul!  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...but it was better than not to hold at all, my friend. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Well said, but remember the memory will always remain . . . All writing comes |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is lovely and has the feel of longing Michael Proust- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ This is a stirring piece. So much packed in such a small package. Very, very well portrayed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I held you briefly... and will forever mourn I couldn't hold you longer. A lot of sadness in a few words. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
The brevity added to the power of this one. I really liked it. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I must agree with PK...sometimes the fewer the words the greater the emotion. Well done! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
bringing tears to my eyes..... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ Yes, it is better to have dreamed than not. Thank you very much. JJ ~ Yes, other times ... other dreams ... yes! IR ~ Colleen, you are a sweetheart. Thanx JM ~ You said it, pal. Brad ~ But only a glimpse. Thanx. Lone Wolf ~ Yes ... memories. Must write of those one day JW ~ Well said and understood. Thanx for the read my friend. Auguste ~ Perceptive comment Marge ~ I hope you don't mean you could stir it with a stick Thank you VERY much.Suthern ~ More longing than sadness ... but maybe a little on the sad side. PK ~ Thanx. I like brevity. JLR ~ Me too SEA ~ Don't do that. Your water is already salty enough Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Wonderfully written. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A true showing of your heart.......beautiful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ Thank you kindly. Gentle Spirit ~ I thank you and my heart thanks you Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful! Lovely! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
well spoken for one who also believes in dreams. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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