Open Poetry #13 |
ever wish of "ought" |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am listless lost in thought you are somewhere where I ought to learn to be so brave and free I am remorseless weep in time I live the thoughtless, soughtless rhyme... I am the half beat measure's time the beat that's ever lost... without the black line measured cost... I am the ever wish of "ought"... And maybe never and forever a gentle whisper of a rhyme... maybe I am forever tethered to smoky eyes and signs, divined? Don't ask me to turn away, when I could brush these tears, dismay-- Don't ask me to be silent when I could hold your hand as friend... I just can't turn and walk away... I just can't leave you here this way. I'll hold you when you need, my friend. I told you. I am here. Defend, you... until...There is no end. *repost from Open 11---for my lonely, gloomy rainy day* |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
k/s, friends would never choose to end? but roads lead on, and bend the introspection of a rainy day oft leads me back along that way . . . e/k Krawdad |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
serenity-This was beautiful, and I am reminded where also I ought. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
So often these thoughts are so sad refrains, certainly we can all relate to experiences within our own lives. Good read. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pretty durn cool for a repost hehe yuh |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like everything about this; it has a haunting quality, can't put my finger on it, Gosh I sure love this laptop, I feel like Passions is right here!!! [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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