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Resistance Fading
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Resistance Fading |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Again, there she was With a beauty dark, and brooding A certain singular somethingness Of confidence exuding Seeming as if one with the night Her pale arms reaching, protruding Deathless, her mask to wear Ever beckoning me along With no emotion emanating But a telepathic siren’s song Guiding me, leading the way Convincing me this could be wrong Once, not long ago I would have been able to resist But now her grip on me, I feel the pull How unceasingly does she insist As I follow her into that dark and lonely place, I know full well, I will not resist |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Again, there she was With a beauty dark, and brooding A certain singular somethingness Of confidence exuding Seeming as if one with the night Her pale arms reaching, protruding Deathless, her mask to wear Ever beckoning me along With no emotion emanating ============================ Once, not long ago I would have been able to resist But now her grip on me, I feel the pull How unceasingly does she insist As I follow her into that dark and lonely place, I know full well, I will not resist ==================== you know my moth motto..... resistance is overrated *L*  very cool poem PK...love the dark edge to this the imagery is vivid, stark and cleverly written. the rhyming words you chose are unique way cool poet sir  Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
....ohhh, I like this |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
very intriguing. Joyce |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
wicked and exciting! Ahhhhhhhhh, the spell of a woman.
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
...with a beauty, dark... yes, they are most lovely.... and this is most beautiful |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks my friends, for sharing your thoughts. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
One cannot resist the siren song. Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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