Open Poetry #13 |
Butterfly.... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Butterfly landed on my pinky yesterday I watched in wonder ~*~ Butterfly kisses a beautiful gift from God so soft and so light ~*~ Butterfly remained I felt at peace with the world tears came to my eyes ~*~ Thank you Butterfly for making my day special I won't soon forget ~SEA~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I plant butterfly bushes and I still get few butterflies. Your little rhymes are very pretty. Joyce |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joyce, we were out at the lake yesterday fishing with the kids and sitting still I had the butterfly land on me. It was the first time, and it swept me up in emotions....it was beautiful.....thanks SEA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
A very pretty picture you paint for us! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Beautiful, SEA. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Butterfly kisses.....................????? I love to nice poetry. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Definitely a gift from God. Your words made it even more precious. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Sea, I hope you receive many more butterfly kisses. Take Care, *Laura* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You would LOVE the butterflies in my yard. They are quite abundant and come to the lovely garden I've planted with their favorite flowers. I've always felt at peace just sitting and watching them ... and yes ... many a pinky landing ... so I know just how elated you felt ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aren't they just so pretty? I have one that I've had since I was about 17 (man I'm getting old.....lol) That is the most beautiful color of blue you would ever see. Thanks Sea..... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Manda_1982 Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 24Washington State,USA |
though pretty, I'm very afraid of butterflies, but the one you write about makes me a little more aware of the beauty, than of the fear. I liked it ~Amanda |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
How sweet, and what a gift from God. Very nicely written. Deb |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
So many wouldn't notice and would therefore, miss the wonder of that gift. Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well you know you had me from the title... Beautiful Sea ... (did I ever tell ya about the time a butterfly landed in my heart) I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you everyone! This was SO magical....I held my breath and watched and just couldn't believe it landed on me.....it was lavender......the whole morning was amazing, there was still snow on the ground....we hiked down to the lake and the spot we normally go to didn't have any snow and the sun was shining bright..... an absolute gift...... SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
SEA - your reply (just above) - you should rephrase into another poem - - I KNOW you can - you write beautifully - - don't waste any of your talent |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I have to agree with Wil, you could do more with this, and should. So few of us these days relate in any way to the natural world or to serendipitous events like this. Write some more, before it fades! Krawdad |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Way to go. Nice senryus. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Who could forget the splendor in a butterflies presence, oh I enjoyed this, I follow them everywhere throughout the summer. Kathleen Blake |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Snow? What is snow? LOL...man that sounds magical SEA. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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