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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-04-23 04:01 PM

Butterfly landed
on my pinky yesterday
I watched in wonder

~*~

Butterfly kisses
a beautiful gift from God
so soft and so light

~*~

Butterfly remained
I felt at peace with the world
tears came to my eyes

~*~

Thank you Butterfly
for making my day special
I won't soon forget

~SEA~

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-23 04:04 PM

I plant butterfly bushes and I still get few butterflies. Your little rhymes are very pretty. Joyce

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
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2 posted 2001-04-23 04:06 PM

Joyce, we were out at the lake yesterday fishing with the kids and sitting still I had the butterfly land on me. It was the first time, and it swept me up in emotions....it was beautiful.....thanks

SEA

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-23 04:08 PM

A very pretty picture you paint for us!

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-04-23 04:23 PM

Beautiful, SEA.

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

5 posted 2001-04-23 04:56 PM

Butterfly kisses.....................?????

I love to nice poetry.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-04-23 04:57 PM

Definitely a gift from God. Your words made it even more precious.

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

7 posted 2001-04-23 05:03 PM

Sea,

I hope you receive many more butterfly kisses.

Take Care,

*Laura*

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-04-23 07:57 PM

SEA~
You would LOVE the butterflies in my yard.
They are quite abundant and come to the lovely garden
I've planted with their favorite flowers.

I've always felt at peace just sitting and watching them ...
and yes ... many a pinky landing ...
so I know just how elated you felt !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-04-23 08:18 PM

Aren't they just so pretty? I have one that I've had since I was about 17 (man I'm getting old.....lol) That is the most beautiful color of blue you would ever see. Thanks Sea.....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Manda_1982
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since 2000-11-01

Posts 24
Washington State,USA

10 posted 2001-04-23 09:19 PM

though pretty, I'm very afraid of butterflies, but the one you write about makes me a little more aware of the beauty, than of the fear. I liked it

~Amanda

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2001-04-23 09:23 PM

How sweet, and what a gift from God.
Very nicely written.
Deb

Tessa
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

12 posted 2001-04-23 09:46 PM

So many wouldn't notice and would therefore, miss the wonder of that gift. Beautiful!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2001-04-23 09:53 PM

well you know you had me from the title...
Beautiful Sea ...
(did I ever tell ya about the time a butterfly landed in my heart)

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

14 posted 2001-04-23 10:07 PM

Thank you everyone! This was SO magical....I held my breath and watched and just couldn't believe it landed on me.....it was lavender......the whole morning was amazing, there was still snow on the ground....we hiked down to the lake and the spot we normally go to didn't have any snow and the sun was shining bright.....

an absolute gift......

SEA

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

15 posted 2001-04-24 01:10 PM

SEA - your reply (just above) - you should rephrase into another poem - - I KNOW you can - you write beautifully - - don't waste any of your talent

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

16 posted 2001-04-24 01:26 PM

I have to agree with Wil, you could do more with this, and should. So few of us these days relate in any way to the natural world or to serendipitous events like this. Write some more, before it fades!

Krawdad
/:-}==
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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

17 posted 2001-04-24 02:09 PM

Way to go. Nice senryus.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

18 posted 2001-04-24 03:38 PM

Who could forget the splendor in a butterflies presence, oh I enjoyed this, I follow them everywhere throughout the summer.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

19 posted 2001-04-24 04:18 PM

Snow? What is snow? LOL...man that sounds magical SEA.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

20 posted 2001-04-24 05:34 PM

enjoy

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