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NIAI
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since 2001-03-29
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0 posted 2001-04-24 12:20 PM


                   PETS

                 Twin Beagles have I
                 Bought Max one day
                 Brother Alex the next
                 Wished not to seperate then
                 Dare not try now

                 Tri-colored
                 Pot bellied
                 Spinly legs
                 Floppy ears
                 Wet noses

                 Diggers
                 Barkers and
                 Howlers
                 Chassers and
                 Runners

                 One eyed Max
                 Bow legged Alex
                 Not worth a dime
                 Wouldn't take a
                 Million



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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-24 12:44 PM


Your poem, too, is priceless!  
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
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2 posted 2001-04-24 08:09 AM


Awwww!  Loved this NIAI ... they're priceless treasures aren't they?  Your love comes shining through in these sweet piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

NIAI
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since 2001-03-29
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3 posted 2001-04-24 10:21 AM


Thanks.  Forgot to mention that both Max & Alex are epileptic - phenabarbital daily. Max lost sight in one eye after " dancing " with a porcupine.  Must be their loving eyes that has me hooked !!


Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2001-04-25 01:38 PM


you really 'touch' us when you write like this -
2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2001-04-25 02:41 PM


Gotta love 'em.
I enjoyed it.
Melton

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