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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-04-23 10:26 PM



Touching Remember
~*Marge Tindal*~

I have to touch remember
to keep what you meant to me
I have no other reason
to hold these memories

If ever a moment so rare
was worth remembering ...
time spent with you was
So, with my heart
I softly touch remember

If you ever wonder ...
I did and I still do



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-04-23 10:29 PM


Marge~ this is one of those to make me cry poems.......I miss my friend so much.......deep, this one goes sooooo deep.....love this Marge    SEA
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SEA~
Sweetie, I had NO doubt when my mailbox sounded, that it was you.
*Hugs* as we both do a little remembering~
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-04-23 10:53 PM


SWEET MARGE...WONDERFUL WRITE

WE ALL HAVE THESE DELICIOUS MEMORIES
TREASURE THEM

AS I DO YOU......

WARRIOR

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4 posted 2001-04-23 10:58 PM


So, with my heart
I softly touch remember

If you ever wonder ...
I did and I still do
========================

some things never leave us...
some things never should...
this is written so fragile and delicate...
very beautiful Margie-girl

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


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5 posted 2001-04-23 11:08 PM


Ahh, this is such a sweet and lovely poem Marge....let's see more!

Nathan

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6 posted 2001-04-23 11:44 PM


Heck do I get a hug?  I miss ya every darn day sweet lady.  What a lovely heart wrenching poem, and what a lucky recipient as there is nothing quite like a Tindal tingle!  
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7 posted 2001-04-23 11:46 PM


Marge--some memories are to be treasured...and I'm sure you have many in your box.  Hugs!
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8 posted 2001-04-24 08:48 AM


Awesome thoughts....

gilded pen...

great heart...

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9 posted 2001-04-24 10:19 AM


So much touchi....Marge

I love to nice poetry.

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10 posted 2001-04-24 10:43 AM


Marge~

your heart is showing again, as it does with all your poems...beautiful...thanks...


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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11 posted 2001-04-24 08:35 PM


This is so touching and lovely, Marge. Very lovely!
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12 posted 2001-04-24 08:42 PM


I just have to echo the others.  This is lovely.  Joyce
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13 posted 2001-04-24 08:49 PM


"Touch Remember"...such a neat phasing of words Marge...I wish I had though of it.
Good piece, my friend.

jwesley

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SoaringEagle~
Sweet Warrior of my heart~
You are a treasure to keep for all time.
I love you.

JanetMarie~
Memories are just like that, aren't they ?
Fragile and delicate sums it up nicely.
Thank you.

Nate, my friend~
You know by now that I'm never at a loss for words~
Thank you so much for enjoying.

Mysteria~
Awww !  A great BIG HUG, sweet lady !

Martie~
As you well know, we can never have enough memories.
Thanks, love.

Karilea~
I thank you, my friend.

Waseem~
Thank you so much.

GreenEyes~
LOL !
My heart is on my sleeve and half the billboards in Florida !
Thanks for enjoying it.

Denise~
Thanks, my sweet friend.

Joyce~
I appreciate your comments very much.

JWesley~
Nice to see you !
Thank you -
I do just reach out and touch it~
So can you, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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15 posted 2001-04-25 03:31 AM


Hello.  I loved you poem.  I enjoyed this poem very much.  I am very new to this web site and it seems great.  Such a vast array of thoughts.
Loved your poem =)


your poem pal, Joe


Marge Tindal
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JoeHouck~
Welcome to Passions.
Thank you for your thoughts on this piece and on this haven we poets call home.
Look forward to seeing more of you in our circle of friends.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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17 posted 2001-04-25 01:19 PM


you 'got' me with this one - I cried too
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18 posted 2001-04-25 01:28 PM


Marge, count me in among PoetFriends with tears in eyes as this poem of your's just swept my heart away...
Lovely thoughts you have expressed as remembering the good times are moments forever held precious...
Hugs2uPoetFriend
~coco~

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19 posted 2001-04-25 01:34 PM


Marge, you light up my life.  Well Done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-04-25 03:39 PM


Wilfred~
I will hold your tears, my friend.
Thank you so much for the reply.

CoCo~
Sweet lady, always keep the memories of the good times -
they are worth forever.

InterLoper~
*gentle smiles here*
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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21 posted 2001-04-26 10:41 AM


So gentle, so tender... so incredibly beautiful.
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SuthernGal~
Thank you for always letting me know
of your enjoyment of what I do.
You're a sweetheart !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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