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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-03-26 04:49 PM


I Fall (again)

Let me say
I'm the one that
messed up this opportunity.
I take full responsibility.
I accept all the blame.
If there's anthing bad to say
mention my name.
No matter what you say or do
I'll never believe I could
have avoided loving you.
Yes my sweet I did what I wanted to do
when I fell in love with you.
I loved you and you knew it.
And you didn't care and you blew it.
But don't worry about it
because i know a guy who'll take the blame.
Hello my name is James.
Give me the blame.
my bigest mistake was falling in love
with a woman who never felt the same.

Jameslee@January07,2001


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Just A Woman
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1 posted 2001-03-26 04:52 PM


"I'll never believe I could have
avoided loving you"

JamesMichael, you have a talent for powerful words filled with emotion, with a gentle style.

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-03-26 04:54 PM


James~ this is so sad....stop blaming yourself....you are wonderful..... SEA
inot2B
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3 posted 2001-03-26 05:03 PM


Wow, you sure are a glutton for punishment. I noticed the (again).
"my bigest mistake was falling in love
with a woman who never felt the same."

Keep trying there is someone just waiting for you.

snowpants
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4 posted 2001-03-26 05:53 PM


Wow...well, first of all, I want to say that you really can't control who your heart decides to fall for...seems to have a mind of its own, ya know? Second, yeah, don't be so hard on yourself...there is someone out there for you! Great write!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

Sven
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5 posted 2001-03-26 06:54 PM


James, be careful with your heart. . . because the higher you go. . . the further you fall. . .

wonderful words my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-12-11 04:38 AM


Thank you Just A Woman, Sea, inot, snowpants and Sven for responding...James
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