Open Poetry #13 |
An Isle Of White & Blue |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Olive oil and moussaka Black olives and feta cheese These are a few of the many things In my picnic basket, which are sure to please We park our bikes on the hillside As we lay out our rug on the grass Then we sit so close together As you hand me some wine in a glass On an island of white is where we are The azure blue of the Meditteranean Sea A place for lovers to drown in their love The perfect place for you and me Santorini is an island of white and blue One of the Greek islands that's so grand Along the pebbled beach is where so many come In search of that perfect tan But for now we will lay in the sunshine With the warm wind caressing my face And know that for now we couldn't possibly be In any better place Suetang |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Some good images here. I think maybe it needs some tightening up a bit, but that's not one of my strong suits. I don't know who to recommend though. There are so very many fine poets here that I haven't gotten to know the styles and particular skills of any of them, really. Not with consistency of convicition. Maybe Marge Tindal, she writes much in few words often. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a lovely 'visual' poem! I enjoyed reading it. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, I envy you your island. You poem is lovely too. Joyce |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
MMM...This was a vacation of a read, sue! Quite dreamy and lovely. Thanks for the escape. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ What a delightful read. I could linger on your Isle of White & Blue for a long, long while. You've used beautiful imagery and given us a lasting look at the serenity of this Isle. Santorini sounds so enchanting - Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this lovely write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you for your lovely words. I was fortunate enough to have travelled to the Greek Islands in 1984 and some places leave you with such wonderful memories.......Sue Suetang |
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