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The Wind Blows
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The Wind Blows |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
The road ends. The river bends. Nothing stays the same. Hope flies. Love dies. No one is to blame. Pages turn. Bridges burn. Life simply goes on. The wind blows even though you, my love, are gone. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a bookfull of sadness in a few short lines...yes, I like this.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as it must Angel. . . as it must. . . the pain is strong here. . . written with a heavy heart. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You say so much in so few words. Very nice. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Have to agree with this...and it blows where it may...totally beyond our control...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It's so sad to see emotions like this, but you have written them so well, TA, as usual! Great write, m'friend... sp  to be with you... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
TA, so sad but so beautifully written. I enjoyed it much. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh..Yes. It goes on. Life and other things even when love leaves, but sometimes I am grateful still for the wind; because if I stand out in it it seems to blow all my sad thoughts away, giving me a feeling of peace. Loved your poem. As you can see, it made me think. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
OH YEEEAAAAA LIFE GOES OOON! LONG AFTER THE THRILL OF LIVING IS GONE!! Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tennessee Angel, You've said so much truths with so little words. Well done  TaraB |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah nothing stops for nothing...yet some things carry on.... well done TA! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I enjoyed the poem and the rhyme cadence was very nice...thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Concise yet bulging with emotion...great job! Mike |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Balladeer - Thank you so much for reading! sven -- The world stops for nothing. I'm so thankful that you always take the time to read and respond. It means a lot. Joyce -- Thank you for taking the time to reply. James -- It surely does blow where it may. Thank you for reading. snowpants -- Thank you so much dear poet! Gentle Spirit -- Thank you for your kind words. Temptress -- I'm so glad that you enjoyed the read and that it made you think. EagleScorpion -- You've got me singing now. Thanks for reading. rosepetal -- Thanks a bunch! sunshine -- Lord, isn't that the truth. Thanks for reading, m'friend. Nathan -- What a lovely response. Thank you. Mike -- Thank you so much. Vandana -- Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. |
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