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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-22 07:22 PM


You wrote to me with such sorrow
How sad was I this day
I just wish there was something I could do
Something positive that I could say

Your life is now facing some hurdles
So many mountains you must climb
Please, always remember I'll be here for you
If you have something on your mind

Although you may feel so lonely
So much grief you'll carry in your load
I just want you to know I'll be waiting here
On the other side of the road

Grief can make you lonely
No matter how much help may be there
If ever you need any guidance
There will always be someone who cares


To Karen - the sun may be hidden from your view but, in time, it will certainly shine on you again

Suetang

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inot2B
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1 posted 2001-04-22 09:27 PM


It's nice to know that you are such a good friend. Sometimes all a person needs is to know someone will be there for them.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-04-23 12:28 PM


Sue...you write this with true understanding, and I am so grateful...my heart healed a bit with this...check your mail, I'm sorry, I'm not normally like this...but then, maybe this IS normal, considering, I don't know...I don't have anything to compare it to.... HUGS to my new lovely friend!
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3 posted 2001-04-23 12:53 PM


Oh, Sue~
How sweet are your words of comfort for a friend.

Our little Serenity gives great hugs too !

Thank you for this post.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2001-04-23 07:33 PM


inot2B
Thank you for your kind words......Sue

serenity
You don't need to say anything, I understand completely.  Just know that I'm here for you....Sue

Marge
Thank you for your kind words as always...Sue

Suetang

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