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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wondering Eyes yearning to linger in pleasure of silky ambience. A heart cries out "wonder if I will ever know" the mystery of the Orient Express? Could I savor her arts and treasures offered with simple elegance? And "if so" will we soon come face to face? Wonder if a kiss from Chung's soft silky lips will be the kiss to make my heart spin and race? Would my hearts desire be quenched within the pleasure of her soft embrace? Wondering while I await my fate. Jameslee@April22,2001 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hummm to liken a woman to The Orient Express... sounds like she's being railroaded! [lol, sorry] Enjoyed! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I am so glad to see you posted more and more these days James. You know how much I love to read your work.  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Enjoyed...can't wait to see how it turns out! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sunshine she's a waitress that works in Pearl City and she is as mysterious as the Orient Express? Marina I appreciate your sweet words of encouragement. JLR I would be interested in how it will turn out also. Hope she likes the poem so she won't burn my toast...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wonderfully romantic write, James! Yes, you'd better let us know how it goes!!  Enjoyed this!!sp  to be with you... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, I loved this one! Beautiful writing! [This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I enjoyed this. Would like to know the ending. Joyce |
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