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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-04-22 05:26 PM





Never in my life did I expect to find a Prince
as sweet as you...
Your tender words are music to my longing heart
I’ve hidden from all view...
You’ve shown me that I need to laugh,
and with me, never at me,
you laugh, too...
Never in my life did I expect to find a Prince
as sweet as you...

Never in my life did I expect to find my love
amongst the stars...
But with your love you’ve taken me to worlds
beyond both Jupiter and Mars...
We’ve taken flight within a kiss,
and touched the wonders,
guided by our hearts...
Never in my life did I expect to find my love,
amongst the stars...

Never in my life did I expect to find a love
who thought as I...
Someone who’s not afraid to take my hand,
to spread their wings,
and learn to fly...
And ever will I hold you in my heart, my love,
beyond eternity...
But never in my life, did I expect to find you,
waiting here...
For me...


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


© Copyright 2001 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-22 05:29 PM


A lovely love poem that reads like a song.  Joyce
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2001-04-22 06:11 PM


Sunny - I am very happy for you, and your writing is beautiful.

BC

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2001-04-22 06:27 PM


Hi Joyce...
Thank you so much, and I'm glad that you heard the melody in this one!!!  You do have a musician's ear......

Hi Bill...
Thank you for your nice reply, and I appreciate your best wishes!!  

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-04-22 07:24 PM


Never...have I ever....seen such a fever!  Wonderful!
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-22 07:33 PM


Sounds like love to me....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Ariana
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6 posted 2001-04-22 08:33 PM


Sunny

I can tell that you sincerely are happy with what you write and in your heart.  I am happy for you too.

Ariana

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-04-22 08:59 PM


SunnyOne~
Just a lovely, lovely, happy write.
Wonderfully you ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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suthern
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8 posted 2001-04-25 03:11 PM


How beautiful... I'm happy for your joy! *S*
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