Too Much Thought (is it the night?)

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Open Poetry #13

Too Much Thought (is it the night?)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-04-22 03:20 AM

Frenzy fighting lonely view,
Adrift on moments,
Left to one who knew.
Facing dark alone too much,
Fearing slightly,
A cold empty, loveless touch.
Star glow fills my eyes,
I'm breathless helpless,
To the midnight skies.

Perhaps I'm wrapped
Too tightly in night's arms,
And on the ending,
My dreams sound their alarms.

Too dependant upon needing a night life?

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

1 posted 2001-04-22 08:47 AM

I gather in a sense of brooding, though calmly told in a mysterious elegance. A rewarding and intriguing read.

Coal

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-04-22 10:36 AM

Temptress....."..Fearing slightly.." Interesting thought. Bob

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-22 11:51 AM

too dependant on needing a life???

good question. . . great poem. . .

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