Open Poetry #13 |
Too Much Thought (is it the constant seriousness of mood?) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
In seriousness I am somber, Mood to mood, Grievances and happiness, ponder. Awakened nerves soul to spirit, Flight above a cloud, Should never learn to fear it. So, I'm awash on shores, Fear of drowning, Fated open minded thought pores. Perhaps I'm forcing this matter, Paintbrush of my artist, Wordless in its thoughts, Page by page, arranged in spatter. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Paintbrush of my artist, Wordless in its thoughts, Page by page, arranged in spatter." I loved this part.....and your new picture is beautiful.....not that the other one wasn't, but I like this one SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps. . . but sometimes, it has to come out. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Sometimes its hard to pen what we feel. Good job on this one! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Perhaps you are forcing the matter, yet, this is a creation within itself. I can relate to your mind wandering over all the avenues of thought! You put it on the page where many will agree...it's a good write! |
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