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Waseem Cheema
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0 posted 2001-04-21 04:41 PM


Apnay dil main kisi ki aas laghay bhatha hoon
(I am sitting while to pin hope on, in my heart)
Apnay dil main muhabat ki pyas laghay bhatha hoon
(I am sitting while having a thirst of love in my heart)

Muhabat too kee hum nay un say lakin
(I have fallen in her Love but)
Apnay dil pay ye zakham laghay bhatha hoon
(I am sitting while having a wound on my heart)

Muhabat kar kay un say bewafai na kee hum nay
(After Love I do not do faithlessness)
Maghar apni peshani pay , yea daag laghay bhatha hoon
(But I am sitting while having this spot on my forehead)

Apna hoo kar bhee w hamain samajtain hain gheer
(She thinks me a stranger while being my own)
Muhabat kay safar main yee elzaam bhee laghay bhatha hoon
(I am sitting while having this blame too in the way of Love )

Pyar kay samundar main, yoon behal hoo kar bhee Wasi
(In the sea of Love, after being too much miserable Wasi)
Apnay seenay main muhabat ki ik aag laghay bhatha hoon
(I am sitting while having a Burn in my chest)
    

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

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JLR
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1 posted 2001-04-21 04:54 PM


Thank you for this.  There is a beauty to these words that I hope you are aware of.  
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2 posted 2001-04-21 06:56 PM


Waseem~
I just 'muhabat' this beautiful piece of your heart.
Thank you for sharing the language and the translation -
but mostly, thank you for your thoughts.
Love really is the universal language !
~*Marge*~

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helen smith
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3 posted 2001-04-22 03:05 AM


MannTum say muhabut karti hon.awwwwwww  I  agree with    all the above   lovely comments  .......
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4 posted 2001-04-22 07:59 AM


I imagine that to hear this, would be a lovely gift, indeed.
Waseem Cheema
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5 posted 2001-04-23 02:56 AM


Thank you to all for this appriciation.

Sunshine ..........yes it would be...lolo

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