Open Poetry #13 |
The Edges of my Dreams |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Here in this mystic place where cool waters flow along the edges of my dreams, I find a haven of serenity and comfort. I'm drawn along a path of beauty kissed by warms winds blowing sigh songs to sun gods above. Golden rays shine through clouds wisped against open skies of blues. I drift in an aromatic buffet awakening a world of senses within me. I hear you whisper my name gently on the winds calling me..... inviting me to be held forever in a moment~ at the edges of my dreams. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Here in this mystic place where cool waters flow along the edges of my dreams, I find a haven of serenity and comfort. I'm drawn along a path of beauty kissed by warms winds blowing sigh songs to sun gods above. Golden rays shine through clouds wisped against open skies of blues. =============== sigh... thank you for painting this scene of serene beautiful imagery GS ... and spirit I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh this is stunning! Well captured, Gentle Spirit. I loved it.
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
JM, I am glad that you could find some peace there....if but for a moment. Your thoughts mean so much to me, thank you for sharing them. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
JAW, thank you for reading and for such an enthusiastic reply. Peace friend. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Your words gave me heartfelt pictures.. thank you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It pleases me to know that you could feel the pictures EAGLE. Thank you for seeing them. *s* It is always a compliment to any poet when someone can see their words. *peace* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This one could be named Gentle Spirit...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what a wonderful place. . . wonderful D. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you James. I appreciate that. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tis one of my favorite places to be Sven. Thanks friend. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Beautiful... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey SG......thanks. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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