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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-04-21 11:34 AM

Here in this mystic place
where cool waters flow
along the edges of my dreams,
I find a haven of serenity and comfort.

I'm drawn along a path of beauty
kissed by warms winds blowing
sigh songs to sun gods above.

Golden rays shine
through clouds wisped
against open skies of blues.

I drift in an aromatic buffet
awakening a world of
senses within me.

I hear you whisper my name
gently on the winds
calling me.....

inviting me to be held
forever in a moment~
at the edges of my dreams.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 04-21-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-04-21 12:01 PM

Here in this mystic place
where cool waters flow
along the edges of my dreams,
I find a haven of serenity and comfort.

I'm drawn along a path of beauty
kissed by warms winds blowing
sigh songs to sun gods above.

Golden rays shine
through clouds wisped
against open skies of blues.
===============

sigh... thank you for painting this scene of serene
beautiful imagery GS ... and spirit

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

2 posted 2001-04-21 12:06 PM

Oh this is stunning! Well captured, Gentle Spirit. I loved it.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-04-21 12:53 PM

JM, I am glad that you could find some peace there....if but for a moment. Your thoughts mean so much to me, thank you for sharing them. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-04-21 12:53 PM

JAW, thank you for reading and for such an enthusiastic reply. Peace friend. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2001-04-21 01:25 PM

Your words gave me heartfelt pictures.. thank you

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-04-21 02:17 PM

It pleases me to know that you could feel the pictures EAGLE. Thank you for seeing them. *s* It is always a compliment to any poet when someone can see their words. *peace*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-04-21 04:28 PM

This one could be named Gentle Spirit...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-22 02:21 AM

what a wonderful place. . .

wonderful D. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-04-22 08:40 PM

Thank you James. I appreciate that. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2001-04-22 08:41 PM

Tis one of my favorite places to be Sven. Thanks friend.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

11 posted 2001-04-23 11:04 AM

Beautiful...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2001-04-23 07:45 PM

Hey SG......thanks. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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