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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-04-21 11:34 AM


Here in this mystic place
where cool waters flow
along the edges of my dreams,
I find a haven of serenity and comfort.

I'm drawn along a path of beauty
kissed by warms winds blowing
sigh songs to sun gods above.

Golden rays shine
through clouds wisped
against open skies of blues.

I drift in an aromatic buffet
awakening a world of
senses within me.

I hear you whisper my name
gently on the winds
calling me.....

inviting me to be held
forever in a moment~
at the edges of my dreams.



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 04-21-2001).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-04-21 12:01 PM


Here in this mystic place
where cool waters flow
along the edges of my dreams,
I find a haven of serenity and comfort.

I'm drawn along a path of beauty
kissed by warms winds blowing
sigh songs to sun gods above.

Golden rays shine
through clouds wisped
against open skies of blues.
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sigh... thank you for painting this scene of serene
beautiful imagery GS ... and spirit

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

2 posted 2001-04-21 12:06 PM


Oh this is stunning!  Well captured, Gentle Spirit.  I loved it.  



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-04-21 12:53 PM


JM, I am glad that you could find some peace there....if but for a moment.  Your thoughts mean so much to me, thank you for sharing them.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-04-21 12:53 PM


JAW, thank you for reading and for such an enthusiastic reply.  Peace friend.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2001-04-21 01:25 PM


Your words gave me heartfelt pictures.. thank you
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-04-21 02:17 PM


It pleases me to know that you could feel the pictures EAGLE.  Thank you for seeing them.  *s*  It is always a compliment to any poet when someone can see their words.   *peace*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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7 posted 2001-04-21 04:28 PM


This one could be named Gentle Spirit...James
Sven
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8 posted 2001-04-22 02:21 AM


what a wonderful place. . .

wonderful D. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-04-22 08:40 PM


Thank you James.  I appreciate that.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2001-04-22 08:41 PM


Tis one of my favorite places to be Sven.  Thanks friend.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
11 posted 2001-04-23 11:04 AM


Beautiful...
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-04-23 07:45 PM


Hey SG......thanks.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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