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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-04-20 08:52 AM


I remember the magic of the moment
of the first time that we touched,
and how time stood still.
You looked deep into my heart
melting the layers of ice surrounding it,
against my will.
I floated on the clouds
all the time believing that a love like this
could not exist,
and now I hold you in my heart...
and your love ~ I can't resist.
With each moment we must be apart
you are never really gone,
for each moment that we love..
the magic will live on.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-04-20 09:16 AM


love is magic isn't it?  This is wonderful!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-04-20 09:18 AM


Beautiful...a lovely write!

Nathan

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-04-20 08:11 PM


Rose, it is indeed magic.  Thank you for taking the time to leave your beautiful thoughts.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-04-20 08:12 PM


Nate, thank you for being so kind.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

kitkat
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5 posted 2001-04-21 07:34 AM


Oh this is romantic. Reminds me of my love I have now.
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-04-21 08:58 AM


Kit, then we are both blessed in love.  Love is a wonderful thing.  Thanks for stopping in.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sven
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7 posted 2001-04-21 07:56 PM


D, the magic will never die. . . as long as there are words to bring it forth. . .

wonderful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Member Rara Avis
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8 posted 2001-04-21 08:05 PM


This is a lovely poem.  Joyce
JLR
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9 posted 2001-04-21 08:22 PM


May the love and the poetry of it live on.
Tessa
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10 posted 2001-04-21 10:01 PM


Quiet and beautiful.  This is quite lovely.
thecraig
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11 posted 2001-04-21 10:53 PM


Yes Love is the strongest magic & you sharing enhances this.
snowpants
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12 posted 2001-04-22 05:01 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, and love like this is wonderful, isn't it??  Great write!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2001-04-22 05:37 PM


Ohhh  my......thank you all for taking the time to reply and leaving such beautiful thoughts.  I really do appreciate you all and wish I had more time here.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Spine Grinder
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14 posted 2001-04-23 11:09 AM


I hope the magic never ends.  
Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2001-04-23 07:47 PM


You and me both!!  *w*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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