Open Poetry #13 |
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The Magic |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
I remember the magic of the moment of the first time that we touched, and how time stood still. You looked deep into my heart melting the layers of ice surrounding it, against my will. I floated on the clouds all the time believing that a love like this could not exist, and now I hold you in my heart... and your love ~ I can't resist. With each moment we must be apart you are never really gone, for each moment that we love.. the magic will live on. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
love is magic isn't it? This is wonderful! Kathleen Blake |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful...a lovely write! Nathan |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rose, it is indeed magic. Thank you for taking the time to leave your beautiful thoughts. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nate, thank you for being so kind. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh this is romantic. Reminds me of my love I have now. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kit, then we are both blessed in love. Love is a wonderful thing. Thanks for stopping in. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
D, the magic will never die. . . as long as there are words to bring it forth. . . wonderful. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a lovely poem. Joyce |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
May the love and the poetry of it live on. |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
Quiet and beautiful. This is quite lovely. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Yes Love is the strongest magic & you sharing enhances this. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is absolutely beautiful, and love like this is wonderful, isn't it?? Great write! sp ![]() to be with you... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ohhh my......thank you all for taking the time to reply and leaving such beautiful thoughts. I really do appreciate you all and wish I had more time here. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I hope the magic never ends. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You and me both!! *w* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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