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walker
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0 posted 2001-04-20 09:32 PM


Taste my love,
you will like it.
Flavoring it,
much pleasure will bring.
Wrap yourself,
in my love.
I promise you will want more.
Think yourself,
in my love.
You'll enjoy it.
I will love you like no other.
Giving you,
the best of me.
Always being there,
for you.
Loving you,
eternally.


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Tennessee Angel
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1 posted 2001-04-20 09:35 PM


Short and sweet.  I really like this one.  
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2 posted 2001-04-20 10:40 PM


very nice feel to this one!    SEA
JLR
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3 posted 2001-04-20 10:51 PM


Yep, that's love...what you do best!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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4 posted 2001-04-21 04:48 AM


Yes, this is what real love is, isn't it?  So romantic, a "real" feeling in this poem.  Thank you for sharing this.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

thecraig
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5 posted 2001-04-21 11:08 PM


A warm turbulant ocean you sound word tempting sea.

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6 posted 2001-04-22 02:11 AM


again, this is how it should be. . .

excellent walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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