Open Poetry #13 |
Skin deep |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Your touch is not ordinary, your hands glide. They rest just where, our spirits connect. Surrendering my mind. Ultimately leading me, to want more of you. Your kiss, bends my will. It veils itself from your true nature. It makes me plea, begging for another kiss. Your touch, your hands, your kiss, capture me, skin deep. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your touch is not ordinary, your hands glide. They rest just where, our spirits connect. ===================== oh yes.. this is very cool.... succinct, sensual and hungry. so much emoted in so few expressions well done walker I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful!! Know the feeling...and it's really cool when it goes soul deep SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The touches and kisses that leave one begging for more are always the best ones...excellent writing. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful feelings, very sensual write....enjoyed much... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The message travels quickly from the skin to the mind. And it is the mind that makes the touch irresistable. And the heart? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Walker... This is a very sensual piece you have penned! There is nothing more satisfying than a kiss from the lips of one you love....excellent!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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