Open Poetry #13 |
Lover's Prey |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lover’s Prey (a song) Closing my eyes, a moment to breathe - feel you brush by, murmurs on stealthy breeze, subliminal sway only partially revealed, darting away teasing tongues repealed. Show me – your waves colors lighting – the way, soft in your play this pastime - of delay, the lover’s prey. Slow turning fan in midnight’s dripping heat, a dreamlike span now reversing in beat, this cooling down, time, like the tides recede when we drown, surrender is so sweet. Show me – your waves colors lighting – the way soft in your play this pastime - of delay, the lover’s prey. © 2001 Corinne Bailey |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ *clapping* I love this! Wonderfully done!! SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmm. Good write. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
YESS!! COOLERS, COR! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
YESS!! COOLERS, COR! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
great, Corinne! Do you have the melody picked out? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Really enjoy the tender feel of this, Corinne! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ok now where is the voice file. I know you have a sweet voice so sing it for us. Park |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne.....a lovely song. Bob |
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