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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-04-20 04:50 PM



Whatever was to be
Now, we shall never know
Forever a mystery
upon the wind it blows...

-Tier



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
RMW
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1 posted 2001-04-20 05:02 PM


Tier.....Lot's of blue around here today. Think...pink. Nonetheless, a lovely poem. Bob
Just A Woman
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2 posted 2001-04-20 05:03 PM


Beautiful, R.T.!   Is good to see you again.  



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-04-20 05:13 PM


Emotions show in brevity...

well done...

Interloper
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4 posted 2001-04-20 05:15 PM


Que sera sera

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-04-20 06:01 PM


Thank you, RMW, I think I just might take your advice. *wink*

awww... *hugs* thank you so much, Just A Woman! You've made my day!

Hello Sunshine, thanks for commenting. It's an oldie for sure! *smiles*

Interloper, funny, my mother quoted the same song once! wait a minute, I think that she even sang that one too! *smiles*

thank you for reading and commenting!

-Tier

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6 posted 2001-04-24 11:05 PM


hi....just wanted to say that mu philosophy of life is just based on this:

whatever will be, will be....

related to this much

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-04-25 01:03 AM


very cool verse T,
succinct and poignant...with a cryptic edge to it
the word unrequited comes to mind...
in the loss that this speaks of...
the "whatever" that never came to be.

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

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