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Just say me once
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Just say me once |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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Just say me once I am yours and you are mines When the spring has on trees Blossoms became flowers They absorbed their fragrance And when Dew fall on the leaves Then you Just say me once I am yours and you are mines When the rainy season has become Black clouds spread all over the sky Bards and animals has gone to their home back And when It rains up to its full extent Then you Just say me once I am yours and you are mines When the sun is being setting Rays of sun come While cutting the edges of the earth And when Everyone busy in his worship Then you Just say me once I am yours and you are mines When the moon is full Shining at its full swing And when You and me alone at a riverside Share our lives Then you Just say me once I am yours and you are mines ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
And when you write I just say this once .......... you break my heart ..........it is lovely waseem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings Waseem...James |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love this Waseem. Your English is beguiling and makes the poem even more effective. Joyce |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
So full of your heart...a wonderful poem! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful poem! subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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