Open Poetry #13 |
Heart motion |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Heart Motion a heart is blowing in the wind tonight beating ever strongly on its flight flowing on the current through the trees carried with the swirl, with such great ease a heart that is heavy yet, at times light but it weaves on till you invite stops for a moment to caress your chimes beautiful music with you in rhymes does not know which direction to go so it rides safely in the ebb's flow swirls over shores, mountains, and streets elevates then descends without a greet gust as it feels tormented pain spilling its happiness throughout the drain once again fills and jumps back in warm stream rippling with its destiny to find the dream "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So that's what I heard early this morning.... I had thought it just a Kansas whisper.... wonderful! |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
wow! that's a great poem. thanks for sharing. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
A heart in motion...i like the idea and way you wrote it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SlickLady~ I enjoyed this. 'a heart is blowing in the wind tonight' GREAT lead-in line ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bumping for a new reader ! Welcome to our library, Gail ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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