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gremlin
Junior Member

since 2001-04-18

Posts 25
NY, USA

0 posted 2001-04-19 04:22 AM

I am on the run, through heavy smoke
Your eyes blind the laughing joke
And by the end your mask is off
In clear water i see Devils love

God making babies on the side
Screams for meaning light
And dying Angel gargels blood
The is no winner in this fight

You run so fast to earn your dime
Before you realize the time is gone
Watch the sand run out of breath
Whose time to go, your guess?

Now play with words - die, by, the time, more, for, your, God, you, fight, his, might
Your guess was right
Still you are in this fight

Now read my lips - of, more, The Jesus, dead, Bible, read, need, crying, baby, feed
I've done my deed
I've killed now
My soul has freed the need

Hello I am Freeing-Stan,
now that we met
Boom-BEM!
And you are dead.

04/19/2001

Enjoy, and let me know what you think.

Stan

p.s. Sorry if this poem offends anyone, i mean no harm to anybody or anyone, this is just a poem about fight within myslef. No there aren't any hidden messages here, maybe. If you wounder about hidden message, then don't do it. Do yourself instead. If you see it, keep it to yourself, because its your mind playing tricks on you. Be happy thats what this poem says. Dream of peace and you just might get it. Its my philosophy. Anyway thanks to those people who take time to read my poems, Let me know if you want find out more [email protected]
Peace and love to everybody, Stan.

[This message has been edited by gremlin (edited 04-19-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-04-19 11:43 AM

This one puzzles me---your statement is beyond me, I fear. But you did evoke a frantic feeling in me--sometimes I too feel like it's all for nothing. My heart was racing trying to keep up the pace here. Thanks for sharing, now excuse me while I go look for a valium!

Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

2 posted 2001-04-19 12:01 PM

The last line of the third stanza, do you mean "Whose?"

and I like my poetry dark, so I enjoyed this one quite a bit, but I feel it would be complete without the "Hello I am freeing-Stan" stanza . . . Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

gremlin
Junior Member

since 2001-04-18

Posts 25
NY, USA

3 posted 2001-04-19 12:06 PM

hehe yeah thats what i meant, i don't read my poetry twice, once i write it then forget it.
I thought the last stanza was the best part of the poem, maybe not.
Its kind of black humor.

Glad you enjoyed that.

Peace and Love to all.
Stan.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-19 01:11 PM

Time slows for no man nor woman, but we can step back and enjoy our own pace. Freedom comes with a price, though one I gladly pay.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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