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As The Need Swarms |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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What is it that you want, Come quell this raging fear, Sunshine lifts its veil Leaves nightime without you here. What is it that you need, Come stall this breaking fear Nightime drifts along, Desperation without you here. What is it that you see, Come take away the fear. Missing you takes breath, Lost without you here. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know that empty lonely feeling when nighttime arrives and no one is here...sighing time ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a feeling known all too well. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
What is it that you see, Come take away the fear. Missing you takes breath, Lost without you here. ...very cool, emotional. You write very vividly, my neighbor. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
nakdthoughts: I truly am sorry that you even have to know such a feeling. Thanks for reading. Sven: Sadly, it IS too well known. Thanks for reading. PoeticKnight: Yes, we are neighbors aren't we?  Thank you for reading, and thank you kindly for your compliments. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I will echo that this is a feeling with which a lot of us are all too familiar...wonderfully expressed, Temptress! sp  to be with you... |
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